The sound is really well put together, but that chord progressing gets quite repetitive after a while. Needs more melody too. I feel like the song is ONLY the chord progressions.
Could be nicer with better mastering, and the flow is a bit broken up by some parts, but otherwise a neat song :3
It needs a bit more mixing up though, with more chord changes and stuff, and some messing with the swell possible... it becomes somewhat stale to me a little over halfway through because it doesn't change all that much. It's a lot like it just repeats
yea, my friend just wanted me to make him a quick meditation track. So i decided to post it for the heck of it xD
thx for the intel though, i'll use it for my other songs as well :)
IT WAS GOING SOMEWHERE... :D
AND THEN IT GOT STUCK arghalrgjashdlkfjsdfg
Like a record...
It needs to go somewhere else, like with new instruments, new melodies, etc.
Needs bass too. :P
Lol im pretty sure I know exactly what you mean. Thanks for the review through.
I like the ideas
Production could use some work though. The whole thing felt a bit hollow like it's missing a certain meatiness it needs to be awesome. Also, you should never need to tell people to turn up bass themselves, work on equalizing the song to give that feel to people without that.
The "Christian worship" sample could have been ground up a bit better, transitions are a bit funny in some spots, few spots where the sound of everything doesn't come together very well.
BUT those are all nit picky things. You've got creativity, and that's a real big part of any song. Keep making music :D
I agree with you 100%. Looking back at this i can hear a few things that i should change in certain spots, but no one has really made a big issue out of it so i wil just leave it xD
but thanks for the review!
It's really nothing we haven't all heard before. The instruments, chord progressions, and beat are all pretty generic, imo. Sounds like a whole lot of loops to me, and the production isn't all that great. I don't feel like the sounds blend together very well. You might want to work on the volumes of the sounds. I felt jerked out of the song by a few of the sudden transitions in there, and honestly, I don't feel like the song really goes anywhere.
Don't get me wrong, it's not bad, but it's definitely not great, in my honest opinion (and I enjoy this style of music, too). But that's all it is, opinion.
Thank you for the review! I love constructive criticism!
Jesus H. Christ, what the hell is wrong with this website?
I'm absolutely digging this song, yet it has such a low rating! D:
I absolutely love how this song sounds, the retro feel and everything. A lot of great ideas and talent in this song, the production is great, and it flows amazingly.
ya most of my songs get like 3 5's then 1.97 haha but whatever, I'm glad you like it, i just wish i had the time to finish maybe in the future
I honestly really like it
The recording could use some work, a decent bit of static, probably due to the mic.
Otherwise, I really like the sound of it, might be a tad bit too echoey, but it suits the feel. You have a nice voice, and your chord transitions are nice. I can feel the emotions in it.
Could use some more to it, like some strings that come in around 1:53, that would be neat. I think you deserve a better score, but eh, the highest rated songs are all trancey, loud, electronic stuff. I have a feeling the people around here aren't totally into your type of music :P
thx for the tips, ya i just kinda threw this one up here to improve it, i did alota techno before im just now sings and playin gutiar but i just hope someone out there likes it no matter what the score on NG is, thats for being one
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